Kia Ora Heaven I'm Hannah from Gilberthorpe School I really love your poem because it has rhyming words but what is assonance? Anyway I really love your blog post. I bet I couldn't have done a good poem like yours. Blog you later!!
Salut Je'mappelle Alyscia,enchantte.This means. Hi my name is Alyscia it's nice to meet you. I am a Year 6 at Gilberthorpe School. I love your poem I have to say that is such a good poem for your age. I also really love the vocabulary it makes me see in my mind what you are trying to say. Au revoir. That means goodbye in french.
Kia Ora Hi my name is Sita and I go to Gilberthorpe School. That poem is so good and scary in the coolest way! I like that you used eternity instead of for ever its really good vocabulary! I was just wondering, how long did it take for you to think about all of those words to make it rhyme? Keep up the great work!
Kia Ora Hey my name is Izzy I'm a year six girl from Gilberthorpe School. This Poem is Awesome and scary I love it!! I love the title it's so spooky. How long did it take you to come up with this. That's all Blog ya later.
Kia Ora Heaven
ReplyDeleteI'm Hannah from Gilberthorpe School
I really love your poem because it has rhyming words but what is assonance?
Anyway I really love your blog post. I bet I couldn't have done a good poem like yours. Blog you later!!
Salut Je'mappelle Alyscia,enchantte.This means.
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Alyscia it's nice to meet you.
I am a Year 6 at Gilberthorpe School.
I love your poem I have to say that is such a good poem for your age.
I also really love the vocabulary it makes me see in my mind what you are trying to say.
Au revoir.
That means goodbye in french.
Hello,
DeleteThanks for the nice compliment.
It is very nice to say.
Ka kite-That means bye in te reo.
Kia Ora
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Sita and I go to Gilberthorpe School.
That poem is so good and scary in the coolest way!
I like that you used eternity instead of for ever its really good vocabulary!
I was just wondering, how long did it take for you to think about all of those words to make it rhyme?
Keep up the great work!
kia ora
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Lilly I go to ohaeawai school I really like your poem.It has really good vocabulary.
Kia Ora
ReplyDeleteHey my name is Izzy I'm a year six girl from Gilberthorpe School.
This Poem is Awesome and scary I love it!!
I love the title it's so spooky.
How long did it take you to come up with this.
That's all Blog ya later.
Hey Heaven,
ReplyDeleteI like your deep dark woods poem.
But for your definition it is not enough info but great job with your poem
From Jorja from Ohaeawai