Do you have B.O ohhh I mean B.Y.O school at your school?

This is mine and Sweyde's first persuasive writing. Read it and comment if I persuaded you.

Lets be a B.Y.O school.

I think that at this school we should be a BYO school (bring your own device). There are some people missing out because whanau cannot afford to pay the payment of having a chromebook Are you with me?  Do you want your child/children to get more cleverer instead of getting more dumber and if your child was badly hurt for example if your child has broken their leg then they can call you. Now this is a big deal for me, BUT, hold your horses we can do something about this. Just read on.

My first reason is we can do more work. For example if your work hasn’t been done you always have to do line’s. Now I don't like to hear that, what I want to hear is that every day pupils are finished their work because they finished their work at home. We can use our phone/ipad and more to do our homework at home.PLUS, we can also go on class sites, class blogs and more at home. In other words pupils can finish some work at home.

The other reason why we should be BYO  is everyone can do it. In other words no one will miss out. If you had an old laptop at home in the corner rusting up but it still works, you can bring it to school it doesn’t matter how it looks like it's about doing more learning and did you know that there is some whanau who have to pay for four kids and do you know how much that coast’s

In summary, I believe we should bring devices to school. I think this because we can learn things faster and easier. Isn’t that what you want?

Our next steps are:

To be independent at using the correct strucutre for persuasive. Have well organised paragraphs with lead sentences and supporting detail.

We will also learn about emotive words and phrases and how to use them to support our argument.

Learn how to use apostrophe to show ownership, not for plurals