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Tuesday 4 July 2017

Has anything really bad happened to your feet before? well look no further, I have written a story about the reasons why we should wear shoes.



  1. To wear shoes or not to wear shoes… That is the question.
Should wear or not wear shoes.
Firstly, If you ask me if I wanted to wear shoes I would go with a straight answer of yes. Do you know why it is important to wear shoes? Because it can prevent your feet from injuries, it can prevent your feet from germs, it can give you good grip to the surface, and shoes provide support for your feet.


They Can Prevent You From Getting Germs
Secondly, I know you’re probably sitting there like “ I don’t need to listen to that” well maybe you do have to listen because i’m just giving you a tip that you should wear shoes wherever you go, because there a germs and bacteria in the ground. There are some people that have infected feet because they have no shoes. Isn’t that a tragedy. I would like to make a stop to that, by letting people know that wearing shoes is your best option.



You Can Grip On Stuff Easier
Thirdly, Depending on where you are or what shoes you are wearing, they can provide you with a better grip on things. If you are taking a little walk, wearing shoes can help you grip onto rocks or difficult terrain It is much easier. There are several different shoe types for different activities and things, and it is always clever to buy them to keep your feet and yourself safe.


It Can Prevent You From Getting Injuries
Fourthly, If you have a foot infection or something is wrong with your feet. Everything you need is two shoes. Shoes with a nice cushion on the bottom is the best type of shoes to go for, It can support your feet while you’re walking, it can decrease your infection or condition, and your feet can stay nice and Healthy. If you want to go barefoot, the best place to go is home, because you know what is on the ground.

In conclusion All of this evidence points to the fact that we should always wear shoes wherever you may go. I hope that you have heard enough because I think you don't want these things to happen to you. We'll, always be aware of your surroundings and always wear shoes, because you never know what will happen. I am Heaven Ngakuru, and thank you for listening to my speech.






W.A.L.T: Persuade an audience, using research information/reasons to support the argument.

What I found hard was: Trying to gather all of the information from different websites.

What I found easy was: How to make all of those facts come together and create one big story.

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