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Monday 10 April 2017

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Should We Have Sports Equipment In The Playground?

By:Heaven Ngakuru.
Teacher:Matua Hemara

Argument:

  1. Because it can prevent people from being bored .
  2. It can keep people occupied .
  3. It can keep us fit by bouncing and running around with the ball .
  4. It can train you for sports .
  5. It can keep you strong and healthy .


My first reason why I think we should have sport equipment in the playground is because it can prevent people from being bored. Would you rather walk around doing nothing or play with some sport equipment. Because I would rather play with the sport equipment. It’s better to play around than walk around doing nothing but talk.

My second reason why we should have sport equipment is because it can keep people occupied (entertained). Imagine if you were sitting on a deck and people were playing basketball, and long ball, and netball and you just wanted to do something fun and then you just get a brain wave. You could just play with them and be more occupied.

My Third reason why we should have sport equipment in the playground is because It can keep us fit by bouncing and running around with the ball. Did you know that if you play around with sport equipment It increases your energy level. It helps your body (change to make better/change to fit new conditions) to even (something commonly done) activities that can cause a bleed and other difficulties, especially in joints and muscles weakened by lack of movement.

My fourth reason why we should have sport equipment is because it can train you for sports. For example what if you were training yourself to play touch and in a few weeks or so you became into a expert and then did you hear that there was a touch tournament was coming up and you were up for the challenge. It was worth the training.

My Last reason reason why we should have sport equipment is because it can keep you strong and healthy. So imagine if you weren’t into sport and everyone else was so into sport and they were all strong and healthy. But then one day you  had an idea to play with some sport gears. And you were thinking it was going to be hard, but really it wasn’t it was quite easy. You kept on playing and your challenges were getting harder but you accomplished them all though.

All this evidence points to the fact that I suggest that we should have sport equipment in the playground to prevent people from being bored, to keep people occupied, to keep us fit by bouncing and running around with the ball, To train you for sports and because it can keep you strong and healthy.

What I found challenging: was to find what kind of arguments I should do.

What I easy: Was to know how to explain about the argument

What I'll focus on next time is to add more complex words to increase in my vocabulary.



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